8 hours, section 0 pacing.
Section 0 phase 0, added pauses after the addition of each of the initial 3 HUD elements so that the addition pops more.
Section 0 phase 1, moving more HUD elements into the world. Decreased slow walk speed to give more time, it is now about a 15 second walk. Reordered element introduction order, repaced introduction speed. Still feel like I need a little bit more for explaining player relationship to the space.
Section 0 phase 2, fixed the way the portal's build percentage is displayed (largely from within the portal itself). Slight lengthening of the section, trying to be careful about making this too long because its an entry point. I feel like I should be able to shift most of the weight off the phase and into 0 or 1.
Faster portal fades.